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The Wind Chill
Contributed by
candysears
on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The wind was cold and furiously
It blew,
The dust whirled around and round
As the wind sang,
It blew with angry and wanting
Respect…
The wind put a chill in these old
Bones…
Oh lord I do believe I heard a bone
Crack..
Pain oh my pain…
The sun is cold as the night, the
Chill of the wind is set at an old
Time high
This cold chill have reached down
10 degrees below,
But “oh lord” I love the cold
Just add a little snow and sleet
If you will,
I would never complain about
The cold,
Even if my bones feel over 100
Years old..
The pain in my back is cutting
Me to threads..
However, as long as I see snow I will
Get along..
Still try to catch a snow flake in my
Mouth,
Each flake cut in a perfect match
Never would I complain..
Just plenty of love for snow and
Sleet,
Loving the frosty moon as it light
Up the sky..
Let the wind blow and sang his song
You know Jack Frost has to whistles
Up frost chill
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2005-12-15 16:37:51]
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Re: The Wind Chill
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:03:09 PM AEST
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Oh Carolyn I just love your poem! Very descriptive, and I love adjectives you use to explain the chill and cold!
And Please let me welcome you to YPDC
Big Welcome aboard, your poetry is beautiful
you will be a wonderful asset to YPDC
Keep up the good work
Warm love
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Re: The Wind Chill
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:31:47 AM AEST
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Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! lol but beautifuly frigid, definately descriptive, very nice . . .
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