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coldicyday
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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GOD why do i feel cold to the touch
is it that my heads to far in the clouds
or am i metal with a rusty crutch
WHY am i shivering in my own hell
only my arms to comfort
only my voice to soothe
MY BOTTLE my friend,my companion and brother
a friend to many but helpful to none
he knows my pain he is always there
losing glimpse of a smile a fleeting joy
or life in my eyes to cold to see
this hollow grave i seek to serve me best
to find peace to find rest to escape this thought
this unhappy day
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lostrelic
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2005-12-15 15:41:23]
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Re: coldicyday
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:48:29 PM AEST
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sad but beautifully written.
Cheer up!
Wat sa wrong wit u?
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: coldicyday
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 03:06:50 PM AEST
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| Sometimes when we think we have lost, the Lord has something ready and better for us. Do not let anyone stand in your way of His good works. Do not betray yourself, do not live outside of yourself, with open arms, He says, come home, fear kills us, anger can be healthy, it can heal us, keep writing and let it out.. do not let fear and lonliness eat you up. This poem written shows me a prayer has been answered .... I am a friend of yours, He is a friend to us all. Raquel Leah :D |
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