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Down A Spiraling Drain
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:28:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see no future
I see no past.
I hear no sounds
And nothing lasts.
Blank, Afraid, And Dreams of Bugs
Crawling up my baggy clothes.
There was no crash
There was no scream
And now I'm stuck,
Somewhere between.
The Roach looks into widened eyes,
And biting me, in ecstasy sighs.
Drain my poison,
Drain my hate,
There's too much
I don't tolerate.
Hand falls Limp,
Again I wake
And nothing stirs,
Because nothing remains.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
... [
2005-12-15 15:28:15]
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Re: Down A Spiraling Drain
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by marie on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:13:22 PM AEST
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| wonderful i felt the emotion. i love it. |
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Re: Down A Spiraling Drain
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by thisismesodeal on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:38:56 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, flows nicely, great emotion. |
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Re: Down A Spiraling Drain
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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"Dreams of Bugs
Crawling up my baggy clothes"
Eeeek! The imagery there!!!
This poem has great imagery. Dark, scary, and full of emotion!
I think it's an awesome write! Keep it up.
Thanks for sharing and take care,
Tim
:-)
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