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Human Nature
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inoc
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:25:44 PM in AEST
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One desires the beauty of 'our human nature'
it complexes the feeling of absolute magnificent structure
that no man nor machine could master
without the help of THE MASTER of all specifications
Seldome do humans realise the absolute miraculous
possabilities of ones own being!
Staging in every event known to man
can one truely realise ones own desirable pain
of worthliness
Practicing sentences that help one be in tune with life
can indeed play the game to reason.
Forthcoming times of change and bridging the gap to the core
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of beauty involves possible results that come to implication.
Time and time again can humans play the game and find marvlous
infastructure that pulls humans together in worldly bliss.
Caring and sharing beyond recognition
is inspelled in ones mind to stage the natrual craft of religion.
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Re: Human Nature
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:28:03 PM AEST
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| nice write. i can not write free verse but i tried in the poem i just wrote but it is also freestlye so i just wrote it as i thougt it and it rhymes in the end. maybe you could give me some pointers. its called not as good as it seems |
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Re: Human Nature
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
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a most inquisitive poem that stirs the heart of all emotions we have 2 deal with on this planet, oh 2 know the answers, then what do we do with them, this is a lovely poem with plenty of insight and dareingness . . .
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Re: Human Nature
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:30:53 PM AEST
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The best copy of original form is love. With love human nature is a beauty. Blessed poem, heavenly..
THE MASTER of all specifications
Seldome do humans realise the absolute miraculous
possabilities of ones own being!
Very well written... Raquel Leah |
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Re: Human Nature
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 06:13:11 AM AEST
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Hey Coni,
Very interesting write.. but I am not sure I understand exactly what youre saying... do you mean that the wisdom and glory of man is foolishness in Gods eyes? (what the Word says) or that to get to bliss we must go through God? (also what the Word says, but twisted by the 'new age'.. only by the Blood of Christ are we saved.) I see that you know this already from reading your other work (which I enjoyed very much by the way) but I am a bit muzzy at your meaning with this one...
Peace be with you,
Joshua |
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Re: Human Nature
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:03:51 AM AEST
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Yes tje foregoing commenters said most of it. A fine specification writer Enoch.
Got to think hard to get to the bottom with it.
Very interesting write
Thanks for sharing
Have a good Lent
I put Ash Wednesday up
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Re: Human Nature
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:56:27 AM AEST
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One desires the beauty of 'our human nature'
it complexes the feeling of absolute magnificent structure
that no man nor machine could master.
As soon as i read those opening lines I knew this was going to be an excellent piece.
Very well thought out work, i wish i could write with this kind of depth myself.
J
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