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not as good as it seems
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:20:26 PM in AEST
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sometimes things arent as good as they seem
all appears well then you wake up the one day
and realize what a fool you have been
to think you believed the smiles were real
and the compassion was genuine and they realy cared
to think you thought they listend to you because they cared
and they could realy relate to you
and you thought you made a few new friends
when realy they didn't hear a word you said
you were meerly rambling nonsense to them
they were only smiling and being polite so you didn't puch them
in the face and they don't care about anything or anyone
but themselves and they dont relate but even if they could they
wouldn't cause that would entail some compassion
see people in this world act like they like you & act like they care
but only when your standing right there
their lives suck just like mine and yours
their dads are drunks and sisters are whores
they just ignore everything that is real
never making anything a very big deal
they pretend that things are better than they are
when realy their worse, worse by far
they are like the rest of the world waiting for your fall
and you don't need friends like those so ***** them all
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Re: not as good as it seems
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:27:53 PM AEST
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terrific job and words so true my friend.
pathetic in the real world this is how things go. Im all real and only want real people in my life.
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Re: not as good as it seems
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 04:58:35 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem...Its being real and that is what life all about...
God Bless! |
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Re: not as good as it seems
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by vampirex on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 06:50:21 PM AEST
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| You have a point and i totally agree with you. its a great write, but one thing that i see that was wrong was your spelling, but other than that it was a great write. |
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