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You
Contributed by
sweetangel
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Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You were there when i needed you,
You were there all along
You were there when things were good
even when things went wrong.
You were there time after time,
to show how much you care,
You were there when i felt so blue,
and my heart began to tare.
You were there day or night,
Your always in my heart,
There will always be a you and me,
coz they cant tare US apart.
Copyright ©
sweetangel
... [
2003-01-24 19:00:00]
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Re: You
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:21:32 PM AEST
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| such a beautiful sentiment and lovingly written |
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Re: You
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 01:20:15 AM AEST
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| awwwww.. very sweet write.. will look for more from you, welcome to ypdc:) |
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Re: You
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 04:37:57 AM AEST
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A proper poem
a lovely proper poem
a lovely skillfull proper poem
a lovely skillfull proper poem that rhymes and scans and has real feeling.
Let's have some more please'
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Re: You
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 08:55:10 AM AEST
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| This is a very loving, heartfelt poem. Touching as well. Welcome to YPDC. Hope to read some more. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: You
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by venkat on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:29:09 AM AEST
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| I found this very late.but this one is sooo sweet and beautiful. venkat |
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Re: You
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:52:08 AM AEST
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simple direct and to the point but with so much feeling
great write and very refereshing
peace be your journey
terry |
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