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The Sea Awaits

Contributed by candysears on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Slowly Creeping,creeping
Conquering each deck as her
Water constantly run,
Know turning back our fate
Has been foretold,
The seawater waits for her
Souls with a big number of
Fours..
Faces are pale and blue
From the freezing seawater
That creeps,
Envoys each soul upon this
Ship,
Your stories will be told, your
Life will continue,
While history remember your
Story…
Passing it on to each generation
Heartache of this tragedy will never
Be forgotten,
The seawater creeping, creeping
Now comes the hard powerful rush
Of the seawater crushing down each
Door,
Claiming each soul that is distant
To live within the sea..
Love will be remember on this
Great ship of dreams..

Copyright Â© candysears ... [ 2005-12-15 15:03:16]
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Re: The Sea Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 03:24:30 PM AEST
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good write i like it. i suck at free verse. you should read and help me with the one i just wrote NOT AS GOOD AS IT SEEMS even at the end i had to make it rhyme but still i hope the rhyme at the end makes it its own. but i liked your poem it is nice

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