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She Can't Be Really Gone
Contributed by
jdawg
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:37:24 AM in AEST
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A river of tears, Running down my face.
While this throw pillow, I embrace.
Dark of night, Is coming near.
But the new day dawning, Is what I fear.
Like shattered glass, Scattered around.
Another heart is broken, And left on the ground.
You can hear the angels coming, Down from the sky.
To take another soul, To whom I never said goodbye.
I cry out, And tell them to wait.
Another soul is gone, And I am to late.
Heavens awaiting for her, To enter the Gates of Pearl.
Gone? She can't be, Because she just came into this world.
~by: Justin L.~
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jdawg
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Re: She Can't Be Really Gone
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by sandypoet on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:52:26 AM AEST
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My nose tingles, My eyes fill up with tears.
Questions not answered .. WHY? what is the purpose ? I lost a sister when I was younger. she was nine yrs old. I am about to turn 40. pain still there. But I know the God we serve. glad he has a plan so we can meet again.. only thing that keeps me going.. love your poem. |
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Re: She Can't Be Really Gone
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by OzChick on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 06:45:23 AM AEST
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Oh Justin this is so sad, I am so sorry for your loss. It definitely feels unfair when a child dies. I can relate to this poem as I once went to a four year old's funeral. Took me a while to accept it, the result was a poem called 'Bertie'. This poem of yours speaks volumes.
Great write.
Blessings, Jenny. |
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Re: She Can't Be Really Gone
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by babyjay on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:19:19 PM AEST
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that is a good write. that made me cry. i know how it feels to love somone and lose them when they didn't even get to see the wonderful world but they are in a better place
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Re: She Can't Be Really Gone
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by inoc on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:03:11 AM AEST
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Sorry about your darling niece. It is so sad and I hope that you have sweet little memories of her and believe one day she will be together with you and her family again.
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