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Crimes of Passion
Contributed by
OzChick
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:43:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Crimes of passion in the dark.
Night time stalkers in the park.
Rape is common, it's a shame.
Too many women feel the pain.
Sadistic urges uncontrolled.
Inflicting pain, destroying souls.
Evil people full of lust.
Illicit craving, feel they must.
It's a sickness, without cure.
Desecrating something pure.
Innocence can't be regained.
Try hard not to feel ashamed.
Crimes of passion are so wrong.
Recovery, it takes so long.
Waking in the night to cry.
Feel so wretched, want to die!
Crimes of passion in the light.
Either way it isn't right.
Lust is evil, it's a sin.
Killing nations from within.
Copyright ©
OzChick
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2005-12-15 01:43:56]
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Re: Crimes of Passion
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:00:42 AM AEST
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and to think, that many crimes of passion
are even masked behind the norms of so called
conventional behavior ...
let alone by what you so powerfully express in your
striking poem ....
*´¨`·.¸¸.*Arsenic
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Re: Crimes of Passion
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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~§~
I felt your poem was...well amazing, cause yeah...But besides the point Of I. It was great, You have amazing talent and you should really keep it up...
And everyone recoves, it does take time, but if you have someone to hold you its gone in the blink of an eye...
~§~
MisunderstoodTeenOfPain
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Re: Crimes of Passion
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:02:20 PM AEST
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| great write but i dont know if you will ever recover from that but good luck and keep your head up |
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Re: Crimes of Passion
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:33:08 AM AEST
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| Strong, strong write Jen, Wow. Peace to you, Laura |
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