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Victims Of The Truth
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:03:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hear you breathe
Feel your heart beat
And you don’t know
What you have given me
But I know
What I’ve received
The sweetest gift
To lay just like this
To be close enough
To touch you
To be allowed
To share this dream
And I could live
A thousand lifetimes
Use every word
I’ve yet to say
Still, in my mind
I doubt I’ll find
There’d come a day
I could convey
The many ways
You move me
With the little
Things you do
So know the tears you dry
Falling from my eyes
They’re just victims
Of the truth
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-12-14 23:03:27]
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by jdawg on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:06:29 AM AEST
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| I loved the poem, I like the way you say so much, in just a little rhyme. Keep up the great work.. If you would post your thoughts on my poem titled: The Hurtful Games You've Played. thanx.. and again keep up the great work. |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:36:51 AM AEST
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and the words speak loud-n-clear.
Very beautifull, heart felt, touching write.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:30:33 AM AEST
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What a great title!!!!
This poem has such an intensity to it, a warm snuggly feeling of love and happiness...(is snuggly a word?)
ah well.....I love the sentiment in this! |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:14:04 PM AEST
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| That is so sweet. Very beautifully written. |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:19:47 PM AEST
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Beautiful work, my friend. That ending, especially... it's poetry! Poetry all over.
Andrew |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by twinkey on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:06:35 PM AEST
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| wow this is amazing! i like it alot! and i feel the same way about someone! and its the most amazing feeling in the world! |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Shade_ on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:37:13 PM AEST
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"And I could live
A thousand lifetimes
Use every word
I’ve yet to say"
I love that part. Beautiful, heartfelt lines.
almost sad...
nicely done. |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:59:52 PM AEST
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Love the title, and furthermore, what it comes to mean at the end...I'm so happy for you and Shannon, Nazzy. That's wonderful that the two of you have found happiness. This is a lovely dedicated piece, and I'm sure she loved it.
Scorp.
(Who thinks the words spoke for themselves quite well) |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 03:28:56 PM AEST
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What can I say?
Perfection. And you know it.
More when my brain decides to function properly again. (Curse you and your breath-stealin', word snatchin' ways!!) ^.^ All my love.
Always,
Tu flor y amiga,
Stephy. |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 12:29:07 AM AEST
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Well, gracious. Yes ... a beautifully penned piece, Scotty.
So soft and subtle, yet powerfully emotive and enchanting.
In a word, flawless.
~Breezy
(sidebar to Jecks ~ yes, snuggly is a word! lol) |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 10:29:04 PM AEST
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This reminds me of a song;
"As sure as there's a heaven up above me
of you i know I'll never be free
As sure as there are stars above I know (I know ) You were made for me"
Quote from "You were made for me" by Sam Cooke.
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 12:43:21 PM AEST
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Naz, My day to try and catch up I guess. Interesting how feelings and body language are the only form of expression that never lies. Yet, they are t he most misinterpreted. What's in our hearts is the truth, and in this poem a deep expression of love.
Very intimate sharing, well done
Will/Terry |
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Re: Victims Of The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th February 2006 @ 03:26:45 AM AEST
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This is simply stated a perfect romantic piece. The opening stanza builds up an enormous heart felt placement. Your words here are simple and wisely chosen, evoking emotion that makes me miss love. Victims of the truth, what an amazing metaphor.
Excellent job as always!
- SCM |
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