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Customer Satisfaction Guaranteed
Contributed by
Mangos
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 08:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Its always the same song
That plays at the same moments
Years or days apart
Regardless of your age
Or where you reside
Among the peasants
Or in mansions
With the stars
With the rise of the sky
And the bent rainbow
The circular solar
Enterprise
Look in my eyes
I am done
And here I am again
Weather or not you believe it
Never makes it untrue
Blanked out
Forgotten
A loss of feeling
A coming of time
Forestall the angels
Let them glide
Luck licks
On your side
Facial ticks
Anxiety prone
Impulsivity well known
Come sit down
Thrown out
The king from his throne
Build a house
The picket fence
Painted black
Interior design
Life-form from beyond
Stretch of the imagination
Catch sniffles
From sneezing
Infection
Contagious is this lust
This craving
This must
Have a nice day
And a nice life
______
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Copyright ©
Mangos
... [
2005-12-14 20:52:17]
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Re: Customer Satisfaction Guaranteed
(User Rating: 1 )
by Smooth on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 09:07:15 PM AEST
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| I loved this! a unique style and deeper meanings than at first glance. Outstanding I think. Thank you for sharing this, I really enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: Customer Satisfaction Guaranteed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:43:27 PM AEST
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a most fascinating poem deep in it's emotional observation of life it's self,
nice style u have . . .
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Re: Customer Satisfaction Guaranteed
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:04:59 AM AEST
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*Whether
There appears to be something terribly sad about this. I've read it a couple times since you've posted. Not sure what happened, but I hope things get better for ya soon. Your feelings are quite detailed here, I like the thought you put into this piece. That ending's kinda tragic.
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