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Just out of sight
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Into the fire, I am cast
Eternity, it seems so small
Living under deaths hand, so fast
Following the evil demons call
I am running alone towards death
Staring into its hollow eyes
Could this be my dreaded last breath,
Fabricated by fate and lies?
Maybe death will not be that hard,
Life has not had mercy on me
It has left my soul completely scarred
To a dark and disgusting degree
Could I just simply fade away?
Do what feels horribly right?
Or should I suffer another day,
While keeping death just out of sight?
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Re: Just out of sight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dri on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:21:32 PM AEST (User
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good word choice, and i'll leave it at that. i normally don't read suicide poetry, because quite frankly it irks me.
the poem by it's self is a great write, and it's my own fault for reading a poem from about a subject i hate.
"it has left my soul completely scarred
to a dark and disgusting degree"
such strength! this line thrilled me. brilliant. |
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