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blissfully ignorant
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:07:53 AM in AEST
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I close my eyes and people smile
making time spent here worth my while
no one knows who I truly am
ignorant to them, my eyes open, I stand
I then start walking in this moment of bliss
now alienated from my city, I am dismissed
I'm not sure where I think I'm going
which is my favorite part, never knowing
what needs to be done, and why I should care
I found myself thinking with a blank stare
so I ended the thought and continued walking
nearing the top of the wall and the city it's blocking
I'll reach my new city and begin spreading lies
to the crowds around me, I simply close my eyes
forever avoiding the sight of reaction...
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2005-12-14 10:07:53]
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Re: blissfully ignorant
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:18:43 AM AEST
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| it started out happily.. a sight you could see in a dream, then all of a sudden, there was the loss, alone.. gone.. distant... and then again, you come back to a nice feeling, to just suddenly escape in your own happiness, its a back and forth feeling, but at the end, I did not like the lies part... I understand though why you, the speaker wrote such words.... Its one of those felt feelings.. RL |
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Re: blissfully ignorant
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:15:34 PM AEST
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nicely done I agree though I do without the lies part but its your write
Michelle |
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