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Come Home
Contributed by
enigma
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Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 07:06:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Come Home
children...
precious children...
come home, children...
i sent you away
thinking to find
knowledge,
truth,
understanding,
beauty,
hope,
Love...
i was foolish, children...
come home...
come home,
children...
come home,
and be with me,
now.
rko
December 14, 2005
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enigma
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2005-12-14 07:06:17]
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Re: Come Home
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:25:36 PM AEST
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A rather straightforward write - and, from this reader's perspective any way, effective for being so. 'Tis the season... to remember those we love and to wish them near if they are not. Touching piece, enigma - and a good reminder for all.
Pausing to think of far off family members,
~Snemmy
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Re: Come Home
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by Dri on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 02:44:21 PM AEST
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oh, i wish i had a home to go to...
beautiful, heartbreaking, lovely... thank you.
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Re: Come Home
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 12:05:34 AM AEST
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Awesome! Very thought provoking.
huggs,
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Re: Come Home
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by PLformalyknownasPpaul on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:51:40 PM AEST
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it's simple and the sentiment expressed is a positive and universal one
i hope thet did come home
its good but if i'm honest it didnt move the heavens or anything
p.s still exploring your back catologe
and i might be putting a band together soon so i hope your still liberal with your copyright...who knows it might never happen
Merry Christmas! |
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