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Afraid
Contributed by
stupidhopeless
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Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:52:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I first met you...
I was afraid to talk to you,
When I first talked to you...
I was afraid to like you,
When I first liked you...
I was afraid to love you,
When I first loved you...
I was afraid to lose you !!!
PS- I'm still afraid.
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2005-12-14 01:52:54]
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Re: Afraid
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by lifeslittleangel on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:36:14 PM AEST
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| Great way to break down the steps. I like it in some senses in my opinion, however, it needs something.. I'm not really sure |
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Re: Afraid
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:05:14 PM AEST
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dude this is simple
but i like it
I think most can relate
hope things work out!
i like yer nickname 2 :) |
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Re: Afraid
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by Smooth on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 09:27:44 PM AEST
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Anyone that has ever loved can relate to the simplicity of this piece. But what the poem is saying is anything but simplistic, it's real.
I liked this, it reminded me of young love. |
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