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~The Vicitim~
Contributed by
Wicked
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:03:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Put me in my place and drag me back to the reality
Thats just life and it isnt anything like a conformity
Breaking back out of my lil slack of playing the victim
Turn it all around and try look at my gentle symptoms
Pity me no more and shun me of my silly indifference
I play nothing more than a subtle gentle hinderance
Drape therefore over me the death of what i once was
I was lost and now im nothing i dont deserve love
Copyright ©
Wicked
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2005-12-13 22:03:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~The Vicitim~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:18:03 PM AEST (User
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I really loved this poem!! ^ ^ Keep up the great work!
P.S. ya kno what? it was so good...that i think it deserves a cookie! uh.... (:::) Does that look like a cookie? Oh well...just PRETEND THEN!
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Re: ~The Vicitim~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:41:51 AM AEST (User
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No one of us is worthy but that' why Jesus went to the cross so we could be worhy as he showed us he luved us no matter what.
A very thought provoking write.
Huggs,
emy |
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