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Cares,,,
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:24:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Noone care's for my affairs..
I wished I was a bird so I could fly in the air.
I sit down in the armchair and look out the window because noone cares.
I wished I had someone to care ,, so I wouldnt have to compare those around me.
I go downstairs and see if there is someone who care's but noone is there.
This is to much pain to bare.
I dont think this is fair that noone care's for me.
Everynight I pray someone will care for me.
I cry so many tear's so I wont have to face the world with noone to care for me.
I have nightmare's and when I wake I find myself all alone with noone to care for me.
I just wished I had one day ,,where someone would care.
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Re: Cares,,,
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by trini on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:48:22 PM AEST
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not bad i must say. i liked reading this, did you know that at least 10 people are thinking about you or caring about you every day? well now you do. keep up the good work.
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Re: Cares,,,
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:55:06 PM AEST
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Well i'm here...and i care. If you ever need someone to talk to or just a friend...i'll be here. Ya kno...it's sorta funny ppl's worst nightmares can actually be reality. Gr8 write i liked it!
-Jessie |
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Re: Cares,,,
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:27:20 PM AEST
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Hey, Butterflygirl, I care. This is such a sad poem, the reader really feels bereft after this. Good write.
*HUGS*
~Jenny~ |
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