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A Perfect Moment In Time
Contributed by
trini
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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A perfect moment in time
Sitting on a counter
Tea
In an over sized cup.
Warming my hands
Observing the escaping steam
Cross-legged
I absorb every stifled sound
The rumbling of a dishwasher
The hum of a record that has ended
Peace
Can not be found else where.
The clock is a ticking reminder
But I disregard its concerns
Time
Can wait for a bit longer
Let my hair flow down
Finish the last of the tepid tea
7:47
A perfect moment in time
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-12-13 21:17:35]
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Re: A Perfect Moment In Time
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by OzChick on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:00:57 AM AEST
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This is indeed a relaxing read. I appreciate those quiet moments, rare in a house with kids.
Great write, thanks for sharing. It's nice to read something cheerful.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: A Perfect Moment In Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:08:45 AM AEST
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| looks like most of my mornings.. nice feel to it, hot and steamy, then I look outside and see the world more.. beyond the cup and the hum of the dishwasher. enjoyed your relaxing moment RL |
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Re: A Perfect Moment In Time
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:45:49 PM AEST
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A nice simple picture this paints, and well put-together. Excellent work.
Andrew |
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