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Nothing i can do
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It’s hard to believe you’re gone
And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do
But your memory will mot be lost
Fore, I’ve loved you for so long
But loving you felt so right
And couldn’t have possibly been wrong
People told me I was crazy
Four loving you so much
And I admit that I still shiver
At the thought of your touch
People told me you would hurt me
And eventually you’d go away
I have to say they were right
But also wrong in many ways
There were wrong
When they told me you’d go away
Because in my heart,
You will forever, stay
It’s hard to believe you’re gone
And that I will no longer see u
I want to change this, so bad
But there’s nothing that I can do
…But hold onto you
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2005-12-13 21:15:27]
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:21:16 PM AEST
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| Sad but sweet, nice job. |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:39:49 PM AEST
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| sad and sweet nice job!!!! |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by trini on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:39:53 PM AEST
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good write. it's ok to hold on for a certian amount of time, but don't dwell on the past, or it may engulf you swallowing your future in memories of "what if's" when you should be thinking, "what now?". just my opinion. do what you wish, but keep up the good work
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:55:30 PM AEST
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So sad and bittersweet. This is a good poem, but I suggest correcting the typos.
A good write though, thanks for sharing.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:37:10 AM AEST
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There were wrong
When they told me you’d go away
Because in my heart,
You will forever, stay
Left to memories, less problems, enjoy those thoughts of what was.. beautiful poem, nice creation... very deep in a wonderful sad way... neeext... RL |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by Inspirational101 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:33:53 PM AEST
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Hey,
I can relate so well to this poem. It is so sad, i feel like that with my boyfriend. He is leaving me. Nothing we can do.
Keep writing you are great and have lots of talent,
With luv,
Inspirational101 |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by jdawg on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 03:26:40 AM AEST
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I love your poem. I can relate so much to this.. thank you for sharing.. god bless and best of wishes to you now and in the future.. keep up the great work.
~Justin L.~ |
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