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The City I Live in... and The Creatures Inside.

Contributed by cleoaurora on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:15:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems






The neon lights still brighten up Jakarta
and those bodies of clumsy souls are still alive
Like the dehydrated parasites on the Sahara
they crave for more blood to survive

They say reality is no better than bad dreams
They're right, life itself is the figure of insanity
It is less forgiving and much worse than it seems
Not a fairy tale, not a happy-ending story

Humans are the world's most sordid vultures
The most vulgar sadists living in the galaxy
So frail, pathetically move with slow gestures
but torment their kind badly with no mercy

Here happens the same, if you want to know
Can you see now that in our lives evil takes part?
When the sun sets down, the evening will glow
Watch the sky become as dark as our rotten hearts!




Copyright © cleoaurora ... [ 2005-12-13 21:15:27]
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Re: The City I Live in... and The Creatures Inside. (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:22:34 AM AEST
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You must have seen some nasty stuff that night, to inspire such a dark view of humanity.
You're probably not far wrong though. Good write.
~Jenny~


Re: The City I Live in... and The Creatures Inside. (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:26:21 PM AEST
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Lol! Try my city on for size :O
Not that this is funny at all
just sad actually
some people dont give a damn
about anything
not even them selves
We need to come together
Good poem here
i like it a lot


Re: The City I Live in... and The Creatures Inside. (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:06:16 AM AEST
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A very pessimistic view on humanity, it's sad but true however.

-Channing-


Re: The City I Live in... and The Creatures Inside. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 09:42:05 PM AEST
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This is such a good poem. You should the dark side of humanity and it was very powerful. I loved this!




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