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ParanoidSchizoid
Contributed by
Dark_and_Cold
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:13:33 PM in AEST
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Living alone
Insanity prone
I can’t be bothered with reality…
Mind open wide
Paranoid pride
Accusations of abnormality
A life destroyed
A mental void
A blank stare from empty eyes
Schizoid mentality
**** rationality
It never seemed to apply
So apathetic
Self anesthetic
I never took the time to feel
Mind in tatters
Not like it matters
None of this was ever real
Darkened room
Mental gloom
Quietly whispering to myself
Shadowy mind
Thoughts intertwined
Never sure if I’m really someone else
They’re looking at me
I’m not what they see
The shadows hide me from the stares
Under this stress
So much to repress
Sanity stretches and tears
Grin in contempt
Logically exempt
I don’t care what you all say
Maniacal smile
I won’t be beguiled
I dreamt you all to life anyway
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:36:59 PM AEST
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| kool !!! |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:48:02 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem and i loved your Pics. They were both so kewl! |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by trini on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:55:33 PM AEST
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this was great. the line between the real and the surreal is ment to be crossed, it's from this where we find our best ideas. This poem is an example of pure poetry through psychosis. keep up the great work.
-trini |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:35:18 PM AEST
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WOW for the pics and WOW for the poem. I really like the rhythm and rhyme style. Great stuff!
~Jenny~ |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:38:50 AM AEST
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Very good job indeed.
well done Brandin. |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Kamal on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 08:46:39 AM AEST
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I feel you crazy mutha&*%#..
I think you a great expressive talented species... continue to grow through your talents it'll show.... |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:34:19 AM AEST
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| nice dream, keep dreaming, I guess. much thought put into this poem.. very insane.. just like ... the poem.. RL |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:02:32 PM AEST
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Very impressive Brandin,
Great flow and an incredible rhyme scheme.
The only place I really stumble is the last line...perhaps take out the word "all"?
( and not too many cliche's either!!!) ;) |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:53:25 AM AEST
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| You know, I feel like that myself all the time. Good write, as always. You make me want to shred every piece I have. =( |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 10:47:12 AM AEST
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nice write i liked it.. i have to post more on here soon read some of mine if u would
DEMON |
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Re: ParanoidSchizoid
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by brew on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:34:57 PM AEST
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WOW.....................You took what was entering in mind, and thought, and captured IT ALL!> I had forgot what a GOOD writer, you were.! I feel embrassed that I DID not remember.............!!!!!!!!!*hangs head* Im just glad you began posting again, and made it know, whom you are.! How could I forget>? Guess work, work, classes, and did I say work>!>!>!>! Keep posting.....lots of talent here., and KEEP IN TOUCH WITH ME> I missed the messages
Brew~ |
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