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Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 08:53:08 PM in AEST
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Are you aroused
Turned on
Put off
As I stick it in
And pull it out
Suck it up
Spit it out
Dry it up
Clean it up
Second round
Do you feel me
Can you taste this
Can you hold on to it
While it tries to please you
It needs you
It completes me
In less time then necessary
You will come to see
Is it warm
Cold but nice
Firm and tender
Or slippery
Like ice
Wet and juicy
Pink strawberry
Sink in
Breathe out
Scream my name
Not so soft
Try it loud
Are you scared
First time around
The block
What a shock
Pretty thing like you
Must have felt the rock
Must have fell to your knees
And loved the
Cock-a-doodle-doo
Its time to wake up
Nothing is new
Except the new you
The old me
Oh to be a flea
On that wall
Peering to floor
And to the kitchen
And down the hall
And in the bedroom
On the porch
In the park
At the mall
In the car
Twice from Idaho
Look out down below
Hate to see you go
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2005-12-13 20:53:08]
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Re: Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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| K, this was completely pointless. |
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Re: Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:48:30 AM AEST
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Very creTIVE WRITING.
HUGGs,
emy
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Re: Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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| a riot, i loved it, write more, refreshing, lol.. very creative.. RL |
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Re: Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:37:07 PM AEST
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Lol!
this made me laugh
so hard. This was really good :p
i think iv read somethin by u b4
i cant remember now for sure
U really slice this person up! woa.
im reading all kinds of sarcastic poems
today! haha too funny
keep it up :) |
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Re: Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:24:54 AM AEST
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I see you've met Brandin (Dark_and_Cold)...*rolls eyes* Be flattered...that may be the nicest comment he's ever left anyone...lol...he must like you ; )
Oh, and...your author's note...cute! lol Nothing to explain though, really...
Love the tongue-in-cheek write here! That ending is harsh...haha. The pace of the flow here is great, but the content is still kinda gross in a way! I can't help but think of my niece, who just turned 15, and how I want to keep her away from perv's like you!
Scorp.
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