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Oceanic
Contributed by
Channing
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 08:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Crashing sapphire waves
Gritty golden sand
Salt infested breeze
Pastel colored sky
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-12-13 20:13:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Oceanic
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:48:25 PM AEST (User
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Well, I wholeheartedly love it; although, personally I would have used "crashing aqua waves." Yours is splendidly ascribed.
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