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bright eyes
Contributed by
buddhistpunk
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Bright eyes
Sometimes I wonder what I’m doing here, spinning on this ball,
Its so frustrating when you’re waiting for the moon to fall,
The sky’s so shrouded in a veil of cloud,
It doesn’t seem there’s a sun at all.
I’ve learnt a few things with my face down in the dirt,
How we hurt the ones we love and love the ones we hurt,
I tried to be true to you, don’t you know it hurt me too,
Some people never say the words ‘I love you’
Gotta keep on tryin’
Keep your head up high an’
When you don’t know where you’re going
Just swim with the river flowin’
Cause someone’s gonna come around and
Lift you from the ground,
They’re gonna take you higher
Turn your life around like ……
Your Big Bright Eyes
Light up my Dark Night Skies,
Oh don’t you realise,
I don’t know what to do,
Just to say that I love you,
I’m tender to your touch,
yeah I love you that much.
A million steps I’ve taken tryin’ to find the perfect town,
A hundred hands I’ve shaken every one I’ve been around
But the only hand worth takin’ is one I still have’nt found
Are you the one to lift me from the ground,
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Re: bright eyes
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed this,, a bit jumbled, but enjoyable :-) |
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Re: bright eyes
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by Packatack on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:14:49 PM AEST
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| Wow thats a good poem, 'Cause someone gonna' come around n lift you outta the ground' like that part best |
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Re: bright eyes
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by lifeslittleangel on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:19:58 AM AEST
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This poem has potential but needs a little work
I think it's actually pretty good though |
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