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i want ....
Contributed by
twinkey
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:53:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i want you here with me always..
i want you to stay for the rest of my days...
i want it to start to rain...
i want a kiss that will be so GREAT it will make me go insain...
i want to wake up with you baby right next to me...
i want you to look me in the eyes and love me....
i want to fine a way to make you care...
i want to be past all you can conpair...
i want to run away with you...
i want you to love me so much you dont know what to do...
i want to have so much of your heart...
i want you to care like i did from the very start...
if i could have ONE thing it would be YOU
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twinkey
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2005-12-13 16:53:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: i want ....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Channing on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:12:51 AM AEST (User
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This is a very wanting poem, however it's not always about what one person wants. It's about what both want. Good write nonetheless.
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Re: i want ....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 05:55:25 PM AEST (User
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good write, i like. beautiful, in a i-love-you kinda of way.
although..your spelling/grammar could use some help here....although that's not what matters.
- Bethani - |
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