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Something to Appreciate
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:35:32 PM in AEST
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Turn this sadness into hate
Something you will appreciate
Let the blood run down
as I run myself into the ground
get to the point I yell
I'm not feeling all to well
My heart is split in two
and it's all because of you
I gave you my heart whole
when you left there was a hole
there's nothing left to say
ever since you pushed me away
the loving way we used to stare
it is now this hating glare
the happiness we once had
is now the emptiness we have
can we still be friends
even though these are the ends
the end of being together
the end of our forever
No more love and no more hate
Something we both can appreciate
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Re: Something to Appreciate
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:43:09 PM AEST
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it is a good poem with a good flow good work
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Re: Something to Appreciate
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by amitos on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:58:59 PM AEST
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| i think that you have mixed the feelings of heart break and hope together ; something that i think cannot go together. i don't know your age but i think you must be young. if you want the other person to come back then write something where there is only hope not pain... but i can see u growing... keep it up |
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Re: Something to Appreciate
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 03:33:48 PM AEST
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very good write sylina i like it alot well i g2g i have to try and make a new poem. ttyl bye bye
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Re: Something to Appreciate
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by thumper on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:40:54 AM AEST
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There's some people that you just can't be friends with once you break up. In a perfect world it's possible, but not here. lol I'm sorry you are in pain. I hope it goes away soon. ;o) Your writes are getting better and better. : ) Write on Linagal, write on!!!
Love you,
Gramma ;o) |
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