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Trapped
Contributed by
skc_cutie
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:15:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walking Through a world of darkness
When will this dark tunnel come to an end?
You left me in the shadows all lonely and cold
Hidden away from the rest of the world
Feeling so alone
wandering this never-ending path
blackness shows no remorse
never to let up
how am I to see
no light shows for eternity
will this path come to end?
I am trying to come back
Trying to claw my way out
To the rest of the world
never going to see the light again
Waking up from this nightmare
blind to seeing all that’s out there
hiding in the shadows of death
Where to go I don't know
stumbling through this darkened tunnel
In this tunnel I am sick
Sick from all around
All mildewed and drafty
Breaking my nails deep within the walls
Trying to tear my way out
Out from the Dark-side of the moon
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skc_cutie
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2005-12-13 14:15:12]
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Re: Trapped
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:25:57 PM AEST
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life does have a way of making things black and bleak good write alot of emontion in this poem
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Re: Trapped
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by amitos on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 03:06:39 PM AEST
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| i like the image of clawing in the tunnel a lot maybe because i can see a lot of my imagery in it. i would like to know more about you because we resemble a lot i can see in the writing...and good luck for the future. |
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Re: Trapped
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:34:05 PM AEST
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Wow, I feel like that right now too, great poem.
Take care.
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