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WHY
Contributed by
kamal
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:47:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why
A little hope that grants familiar treasures,
It has been many times we cause our life to live by desparate measures,
We do what we have to just to make things better,
Only if our mother ever knew, she’ll probably no longer trust you or maybe she’s down with you & probably blesses you praying you’ll make it through,
But this is what’s gonna crush your mental, the MOST HIGH not only knows what you been through, but watches you, while you go through
So consider your punishment to have mercy,
Even though everyone goes through a period in time when your surroundings make you live thirsty,
Hoping to get a quick quench,
That’s why people cry, “Life’s a *****” & then you die,
Doing whatever it took just to get by,
So that your family no longer have to cry & question, GOD
Why
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kamal
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2005-12-13 13:47:37]
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Re: WHY
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:20:35 PM AEST
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| interesting poem kinda abstract |
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Re: WHY
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:53:02 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. It was really cool. I loved the last sentence. It was my fav! keep it up!
Jessie |
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Re: WHY
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 04:34:53 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooo!!!!!!!
dis one rocks big time!
luv it!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: WHY
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 06:23:31 PM AEST
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| well done |
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