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Contributed by
saha
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:10:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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who's to judge
who's to tell me
who i am
and who i'm not
who make up
society that rule the world
somewhere in soul
i know that simple truth:
if i stand on the edge of the roof
and jump
none of them would care
so for what reason
you are bothering me?
i'm so sick of listening:
"we will set you free"
stand out
of the crowd
begin your speech
convince me that
you want the same that i want
and that you will lead us all
for what reason
you are bothering me?
i'm so sick of listening:
"we will set you free"
Copyright ©
saha
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2005-12-13 12:10:47]
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:14:44 PM AEST
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I loved the honesty in this poem.
It was direct and to the point.
Really good job.
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by SkC_cutie on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:24:11 PM AEST
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| I loved the poem! I found it very Intriguing! I am not quite sure what inspired you to write this poem, but that is exactly how I feel also. |
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by jdawg on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:44:13 AM AEST
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i have to agree with the first comment, i love how it was direct and right to the point.. trully a great write. thanx for sharing this. best of wishes.
~Justin L.~ |
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