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Spitting away the longest day
Contributed by
levymetal
on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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On the floor
I do not feel anything anymore
Once more
This pill isnt for sure if....
I'll wake up tomorrow
Or scare away my pain
The pill sits in the pit of my stomache
Ringing my neck
Never letting me forget
The first day we met
And how our relationship is one big prescription of regret.
In my closet
I wait for a reason to make a call back
If I ever get back
Until then i forget the combination to the door and lock it
(Lock it. Hide away. Peek through the key hole. Numb away the day.)
Glazy eyes
Just make your submission
In and out of my life
You were nothing but a drifter .
With your thumb out on the highway
I saw through your tempoary charade
This just has to be the longest day
This will be the last day i'll put up with it .
I scream for remberence
I yell for vengence
My fist in the air
My hand covering my mouth now.
If i was here or not
Man, you wouldnt care
It makes no difference
I'm just wasting air
Is this the end
Or the begining of rest of my life?
This is the longest way
The scenic road to avoid immidate attention
This is the longest day
Of the shortest release and the answer to THE END.
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levymetal
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2005-12-13 11:34:26]
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Re: Spitting away the longest day
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by tiggytom on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:48:34 AM AEST
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Great stuff, But as we all know the first is the longest day without your good 'ol friend there :)
I enjoyed this thanks
Tom |
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Re: Spitting away the longest day
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 01:37:52 AM AEST
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brilliant, one of them best writes ive read in a long time.
thankyou for your comments on my work, they were rgeatly appreciated.
perhaps we should talk some time?
x x |
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Re: Spitting away the longest day
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 02:50:11 PM AEST
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GREAT JOB! You're one of my favorite writers on this site. Keep up the good work. I loved this poem and everything it brought with it....it brought a sense of confusion and anger but no loss...anyways, keep it up!
ALINA |
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