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And I Bathed Them In Sadness
Contributed by
Shade_
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 10:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I learned to kiss every forsaken moment
Upon a cracked sidewalk
Saving every tear that had fallen
Kept in my pocket with no lock
Days I gathered petals
As they wept upon me
And I bathed them in sadness
Loving each one slightly, tenderly, softly
Today I could not capture them all
The moments pasted without my kiss
Then even I bathed in sadness
For every moment, tear, petal, I shall miss…
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Re: And I Bathed Them In Sadness
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:06:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful picture, beautiful words. |
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Re: And I Bathed Them In Sadness
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by Packatack on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:12:20 AM AEST
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Awesome write! especially the pic
It makes your poem more understanding
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Re: And I Bathed Them In Sadness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:34:27 PM AEST
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softly written, beautifully penned. It brought forth the feeling deep within me while I was reading it
bathed them in sadness I so felt this
The pic brings it to life
Michelle |
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