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The Rain Falls.
Contributed by
OzChick
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 08:36:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The rain falls. Pitter patter, pitter patter.
Silence calls. Chitter chatter, chitter chatter.
Empty halls. Doesn't matter, doesn't matter.
The rain still falls. Pitter patter, pitter patter.
The sun shines. Hot 'n' bright, hot 'n' bright.
National lines. Wanna fight, wanna fight!
Warning signs. Isn't right, isn't right.
The sun still shines. Hot 'n' bright, hot 'n' bright.
The wind blows. Hot 'n' cold, hot 'n' cold.
Life shows. Getting old, getting old.
God knows. We've been told, we've been told.
The wind still blows. Hot 'n' cold, hot 'n' cold.
The world turns. Round 'n' round, round 'n' round.
Fire burns. Hear the sound, hear the sound.
Chaos churns. Hearts pound, hearts pound.
The world still turns. Round 'n' round, round 'n' round
Copyright ©
OzChick
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Re: The Rain Falls.
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:07:16 PM AEST
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very cool, very original, had a nice flow to it
nice write |
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Re: The Rain Falls.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 02:02:56 PM AEST
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ther are'nt 2 many lyrics on here that r suppose 2 be songs, that inspire me let alone poems, but i gotta say this is magnificent, it's simple, logical and as i was reading it i had the worst urge 2 pick up my acoustic guitar and add music 2 it, it makes a terffic folk song, and i agree it's not only powerful and well written and a nice style u have i might add, but it so true, eveyrthing is mere illusion, or 2 coin the tittle phrase from the song by the group kansas, " All We Are Is Dust In The Wind "
i realy enjoyed reading this . . .
Ben
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Re: The Rain Falls.
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 03:48:28 PM AEST
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| I feel you on this one |
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Re: The Rain Falls.
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by cleoaurora on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:00:40 PM AEST
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| very simple and i feel like it just amazingly flows from the beginning til the end! well done! :D one of the best i ever read. |
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Re: The Rain Falls.
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by jdawg on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 12:16:49 AM AEST
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truly a great write.. im sorry im just now getting to read all your poems.. and i haven't read one yet i dislike.. keep up all the great work..god bless and best wishes
~Justin L.~ |
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