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it gets worse
Contributed by
nannerz
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:38:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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what has it all become
my life is a waste
i thought id been down here
before
I thought it couldnt get any worse
boy was i wrong
just when i reached rock bottem
the floor fell out
now im in a hole
and the walls are
falling in around me
soon i will be buried alive
surrounded by my own
failings
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nannerz
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2005-12-12 19:38:20]
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Re: it gets worse
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:08:25 PM AEST
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your message got across,
good job expressing yourself here |
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Re: it gets worse
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by STECKS on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:15:39 PM AEST
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| Great expressions here. Definitly feel it. |
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Re: it gets worse
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 04:54:17 PM AEST
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| well done |
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