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Contributed by
trini
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A morbid faith leaves hands stained with blood,
The truth lies within your heart.
I’d give anything to rewrite this tragedy,
Subliminal verses written in my hands.
Level the gun between my eyes,
Life is no longer worth the fight.
Drown out my sorrows in a solitary pill,
End the pain, see the light.
A one way trip that’s never coming back,
Say goodbye to the one’s I love.
Draw a last breath before leaving the world behind,
Take my final look, and I’ll jump off the edge.
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-12-12 19:02:19]
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Re: -untitled-
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 05:20:41 PM AEST
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Life is 10% what you make it, and 90% how you take it.. who wrote that anyway?? sound advice..
very dark poem.. still see some hope in there... the heart where truth lies.. re-write this tragedy...really want to go for seconds eh.. ???? RL |
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Re: -untitled-
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 05:02:16 PM AEST
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| well done |
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