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So Close to me
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 06:44:08 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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You talk to me like an enemy,
constantly scratching at my scars
stealing my hopes, leaving me breathless.
Your always so close to me
my one true love, you know me best
but you always still hurt me right,
making me cry in my sleep.
You rip out my soul
and eat it in front of my screaming eyes.
The tears you cause me rip at my healing scars
making warm blood seep away like rain on my window,
you tear at my dreams never caring for their pain.
My one true love, your always so close
you always remind me of the aching pain.
My heart, you constantly betray me
leaving me breathless on my bed,
but i always love you.
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gery_giggles
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2005-12-12 18:44:08]
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Re: So Close to me
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by trini on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:06:16 PM AEST
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for having writers block this was pretty well written. i love the irony in the end, your love causes you pain yet you can not forget them and feel as if you'll always love them. maybe i like it so much becasue i can relate...either way it was a great write. keep up the good work.
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Re: So Close to me
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 05:05:08 PM AEST
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