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A Song In My Head
Contributed by
Manda2
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:33:56 PM in AEST
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This morning I climbed out of my bed,
With this little tune playing in my head.
As I ate my breakfast it continued to play,
Ready to plague me for the rest of the day.
On the way to work it only got worse,
The lyrics and the tune became a curse.
The rhythm of the train seemed to join in,
I couldn't fight it, and then I had to sing!.
Other passengers exchanged strange looks,
Hiding their faces in newspapers and books.
Colleagues at work were exactly the same,
I was so relieved when five oclock came.
Then on the way home the tune remained,
By this time my sanity it had claimed.
That night as I got back into my bed,
That dreaded tune played in my head.
I closed my eyes tight and turned of the light,
And hoped and prayed for a peaceful night.
But as I nearly dozed off I wanted to scream,
For it was already playing in my dream!
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Manda2
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Re: A Song In My Head
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:50:53 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. i thought it was funny. Fore, I, too am a victim of the little tunes in my head! (Along with other voices, but that''s not the point!) i really liked it! Gr8 work! |
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Re: A Song In My Head
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 06:58:21 PM AEST
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| My life is a song in my head, maybe I'm just in my head...maybe my head doesn't exist. Your poem is cool, hence why i commented and now i'm just wasting time...and i concurr with the gurl with voices in her head, I too suffer from these... |
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Re: A Song In My Head
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by Candice on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:04:03 PM AEST
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Wow
What a great poem!
Truely inspiring
I know just what you mean
Thanx |
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Re: A Song In My Head
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 05:09:38 PM AEST
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| really good, a fine write |
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Re: A Song In My Head
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:55:40 AM AEST
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| The times that has happened to me, so true I think your very talented after reading through you poems, all great work. xxx |
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