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The Feeling Of Being What Isnt
Contributed by
ThrougHThEEyeSOfPaiN666
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:56:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You feel pain, day by day it seeps in,
No matter if you hide it away.
Life screws you over in side and out.
And Im at the hight of my biggest yet,
With no where to turn nor a person insight.
I close my eyes everynight from the day I felt it,
The most pain no one should feel.
I couldnt turn to anyone without feeling Im still on my own
I need someone there before I end it soon.
Gone forever, Out and about of the Dark side of heaven
Jis hidding out, waiting for someone to understand.
So I'll close my eyes for one last time,
As this "Great" life screws me over, again.
I'll go no where, but down.
I'll see no one, but corps.
And it feels as now thats all they want me to see.
I'm sorry If I missed the ones who didnt,
But your life was great, not mine..
I felt the feeling of being what isnt for the last time,
For now my life is at an end.
Copyright ©
ThrougHThEEyeSOfPaiN666
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2005-12-12 16:56:25]
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Re: The Feeling Of Being What Isnt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:00:01 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry that you feel that way. i remember feeling that a few years ago and its the worst. i really like the poem! i love the emotion you put into it and i hope you continue to write many more like it! |
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Re: The Feeling Of Being What Isnt
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:05:24 PM AEST
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| an emotional write,good job |
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