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My Nightmare
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:33:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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shadows looming
In the corner of my eye
a silhoute of a bird
flying in the night sky
my heart's beating fast
thumping away
as i look around
in disarray
i can't find my way out
of this nightmare
I'm trapped in this world
which's filled with dispair
i start to run
as fast as i can
like I've been doing
since this nightmare began
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2005-12-12 16:33:55]
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Re: My Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:48:24 PM AEST
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| i really like the format you used to write this poem. very well composed and the rhyming adds a nice taste to it as well. |
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Re: My Nightmare
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:52:26 PM AEST
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I have nightmares...really bad ones...I used to wake up with blood and tooth all over my pillow...I guess I'd clamp down so hard that I actually busted by back teeth...night terrors maybe....it stopped when I turned about twenty...the tooth thing...i still have the nightmares...
anyway, real horrorshow like poem here...very nice love it...
Write Everything!
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Re: My Nightmare
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by cleoaurora on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:55:59 AM AEST
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| great poem u have here... simple and amazing. love the rhyme and how it is composed. :) |
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Re: My Nightmare
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 12:43:21 PM AEST
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life can be a nightmare at times- just remember shadows cannot exsit without a light source.
Peace and Light |
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