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You Came
Contributed by
honeychild8915
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:37:33 PM in AEST
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I was lonely,
You came
to comfort me
i was angry,
you came
to make me happy.
you angered me
you came.
i pushed you away.
day by day
you came,
like a fly to the flame.
in times of hopelessness
you came,
and gave me hope.
sorry i pushed you away,
when you came,
you gave me the strength to live.
i wanted to tell you
i was greatful for all the times
when you came.
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Re: You Came
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:13:54 PM AEST
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i can relate
good emotion
great write |
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Re: You Came
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:42:45 PM AEST
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| i understand completely i push way to much myself |
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Re: You Came
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by Poetic_Influence on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:05:27 PM AEST
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| .......nice |
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Re: You Came
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:34:38 PM AEST
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| well done, i can also relate |
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