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Shrunk
Contributed by
justme03
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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The room was bland.
No personality.
I found it a tedious task just
to walk through the door.
A chair, a desk and a chair
behind the desk.
The man ushered me through
the entryway, urging me into
the depths of the monotonous chamber.
He gestured towards the
chair, indicating I was to sit.
I sat as he crossed to the chair behind the desk.
In constant motion.
Clenching my fists,
wringing my wrists,
tapping my foot,
and staring at the man with a cold look.
I was brought here just for him to delve
himself into my life and purge
my mind of all supposed abnormal
idiosyncrasies .
"I’m not gonna let you get to me.
I will not let you into my mind.
I am going to sit here in silence
and you can only try to get inside."
I said these things over and over inside my head;
attempting to telepathically
communicate to him
what I thought I had already
said to him with my outside behavior.
The man sat arranging papers
he had removed from a file.
He placed them neatly in front
of him, obviously
not one to deal with a mess.
Starting to ask me questions
hoping for me to confess
of some psychotic dreams,
I looked at him knowing
he was tearing at my seams.
Everything was going to be different;
for this man was my therapist
otherwise known as my shrink.
~Kortnie~
***Look For "The Aftermath of Shrunk" Coming Soon***
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justme03
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Re: Shrunk
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:07:11 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed this read, unusual format, nice rythm, :-) |
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Re: Shrunk
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:20:38 PM AEST
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| Spectacular poem...... another masterpiece sweetie...... I cannot wait to see & read the part 2 of this poem.... Excellent poem!!! |
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Re: Shrunk
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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Kortnie I can so much relate to your poem. A deep and open write. You've poured out ur emotions and inner feelings well. Thanks so much for sharing ur work with us. Keep penning down ur emotions.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Shrunk
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by Poetic_Influence on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:07:30 PM AEST
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| yep |
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Re: Shrunk
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:31:11 PM AEST
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lol great write i really enjoyed ty
r.m.wilder |
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Re: Shrunk
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by Channing on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:18:15 PM AEST
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| Interesting, seems more like a short story than a poem. Good nonetheless though! |
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Re: Shrunk
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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| great poem ,well put together. |
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Re: Shrunk
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by crimson_regret420 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 03:51:51 PM AEST
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| I can completely relate. Great write! |
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