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Lost In Pleasure
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 01:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It is under the dark veil of night with which hidden pleasures do creep.
Symbolic of sin are these, the dark thoughts that plague our sleep.
Drifting away into lands of moral shadows, searching for eternal pleasure;
Tasting the forbidden fruit of lustful joy is what we truly treasure.
Everything is going to plan in this; your secret, fantastic, fantasy.
Your true desires for eternal pleasure are easily fulfilled under a tree.
Burning with desire, your body feels hotter than the very fires of hell;
This is where you shall live your eternity until the last toll of life’s bell.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2005-12-12 13:27:42]
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:02:40 PM AEST
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Darkly sensual, nice write thanx for sharing
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by lost_chadow on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:12:42 PM AEST
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| Now i feel guilty;) |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by justme03 on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:13:12 PM AEST
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Dunno what it is about this poem, but it turns me on lol
i loved it! totally awesome
lots o love, Kortnie |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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WoW an absolutely sensational poem penned so well. I like the flow and rhyme. You've done a good job on this one. Thanks for sharing it with us.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:26:50 PM AEST
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| great job. i could really see the images in my head as i read this. you do a good job conveying the emotion and the words you use really let the reader see what's going on. |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by Sahara on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:10:22 PM AEST
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Really I don't know that I can say anything that hasn't already been said. I loved it . . .
Sonya |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 03:38:53 AM AEST
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| It's o.k.. keep writing on..:-) venkat |
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Re: Lost In Pleasure
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:39:51 PM AEST
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| well done , great imagery |
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