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Punishing Me
Contributed by
Shmokin
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 01:26:20 PM in AEST
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Punishing Me
I can’t eat, I can’t sleep
I haven’t the strength to drag my feet
The sun beams down an orangey yellow
A zephyr cools, a day to be mellow
But not for me appreciation of such gifts
How can such beauty fail to make spirits lift?
For what is before me
I fail to see
I’m so bloody caught up
In punishing me
No sense of worth
Hampers ability for appreciation
It was not made for me
This Godly creation
Close the blinds
Shut the door
For to wallow in my misery
I can look, no more
Take these pleasures to those who can see
Today the beauty in life, is wasted on me
XShmokinX
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Shmokin
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Re: Punishing Me
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by justme03 on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:14:54 PM AEST
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Woah! Wikid! totally awesome! i really like the line "Today the beauty in life, is wasted on me"
that line was shweet, but of course the whole poem was shweet! loves it! lots o love, Kortnie |
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Re: Punishing Me
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by Poetic_Influence on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:08:10 PM AEST
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| i hate my life |
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Re: Punishing Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 06:25:54 AM AEST
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Oh yeah, u r a great writer full with wisdom.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Punishing Me
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:21:00 AM AEST
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A great poem, I can relate to this.
Take care.
Scott |
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