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lost
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:14:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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rain they pour
they sang me a song
a slow sad song of misery
darkness danced
they played with puns
and they swallowed some of my miseries
but why
do i feel
this cold and faint world
crushing me
they take my pride
full in their stride
and try to break me into a million piecces
but yet
that is not enough
they want to step on me
they keep
making me fall
by tripping me
every step i try to make
to move forward
lost.
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Re: lost
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:59:17 PM AEST
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great write reminds me of me lol
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Re: lost
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by Kayden on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:37:54 PM AEST
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| WOW, nice wright. You have seen the way of the world now. The only ones of compassion is you family. |
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Re: lost
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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| well done |
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