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Who can answer?
Contributed by
kamal
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:12:00 AM in AEST
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Should I believe or continue to be deceived?
Who’s to say her love for me now wouldn’t again mislead
ME to think she’s in love with someone that haves an open heart,
My integrity is never too high to please
The one I love & the one that reside up above,
So my righteousness is my attractiveness,
Now I understand why people want this,
Not to sound so conceded,
Only if they saw me before I gotten to this Point in life,
I wasn’t all about Christ & doing what’s right,
I still have things to fix, but that’s my best kept secret,
its hidden because knowing them isn’t easily forgiving,
I have a passion for love that’s driven & a personality that’s natural,
So why stoop low to someone who love words doesn’t seem factual,
But since God is forgiving then why is it so hard to continue
Out this good deed,
Because I have this question that you can receive,
Should I believe or continue to be deceived?
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Re: Who can answer?
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by Buggsy on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:14:25 AM AEST
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| I like it Kamal, I really do like it |
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Re: Who can answer?
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by STECKS on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:02:26 PM AEST
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| Its a very Nice poem. Very Enjoyable. Keep up the good writing |
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Re: Who can answer?
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 08:43:24 AM AEST
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Continue to believe
The dark one is always there to decieve
His power is of this world
Pray Jesus name
Tis the reason He came
Ask and you shall recieve
Knock and it will be open
Always seek forgiveness
Man is weak
Christ will hold you in His arms
This poem says a lot--good write--keep it up
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