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Scars
Contributed by
Kellros
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Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 08:13:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Words rumble and I stumble forth,
caged in my own thoughts,
looking for a path non-existant,
the horizon is near, but yet so far,
i'm struggling to see the end...
but still i can't understand
Scars cut deep into flesh,
but the eye can't see,
what experiences what made me be,
still walking lonely and dying
and i still don't understand...
Open yourself and tear inside,
draught, drunk on confusion,
deprived of illusion,
bruised by the truth
and scarred by the lies,
i don't understand
why?
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2005-12-12 08:13:58]
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Re: Scars
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by slogan on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:13:17 AM AEST
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| I love the flow of this poem..great write...jh |
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Re: Scars
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by Buggsy on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 10:04:17 AM AEST
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| I like it and agree with the previous comment, it flows really well. |
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Re: Scars
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by justme03 on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 10:10:16 AM AEST
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As the others said this poem indeed has a great flow to it and i love the stanza"Scars cut deep into flesh,
but the eye can't see,
what experiences what made me be,
still walking lonely and dying
and i still don't understand..."
this speaks so much! i absolutly love this.
lots o love, Kortnie |
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Re: Scars
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:22:33 AM AEST
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there are many things in life, that I think just cannot be understood...but I disagree with the part,"deprived of illusion".
I guess in life, everything is illusion, so thats why we get lost, and are unable to differentiate the border between non-reality and reality.
good write, though.I enjoyed it.
cheers,
-glass |
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