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First Taste of Ice (My Existance)
Contributed by
Blissfulviolet
on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 01:59:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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First Taste of Ice
(my existance)
Scorched earth
Spiritual death
Floating to a place where they do not speak
Neptune caught in translation
As I enter my way past mountains & caves
In darkness, on this throne we reign
There is a place where light has no shadow
Oh Mary...Come enter these chambers with me
In our darkest hours
I feel the crisp wind on my face
darkness...take me under
We swim till we cannot see
a blindness striking vibrantly
Alas we have come
Marking their hands
Under signs for which they stand
Mercury spinning out of place
Oh Mary...bow down with me
in this forever glow
The time has come to leave this land
once my home
She cries her bitter sweet tears
Shedding her warmth over my eyes
Reminding me of what I used to be
Darkness pull me up from here
Give me a reason to seek
These moments sink into me
I am my master
For my tongue has touched snow
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Blissfulviolet
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2005-12-12 01:59:17]
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Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance)
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:15:18 AM AEST
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Great write and awesomely thought provoking.
huggs,
emy
I'm tryin to rememba where I saw your graphics first.
is that German?
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Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 04:32:41 PM AEST
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| wow spectacular job. i'm jealous. lol. ^^ |
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Re: First Taste of Ice (My Existance)
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by heartquake on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 11:43:09 PM AEST
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| that's a really good write, love the imagery, you did a great job describing it all |
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