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Contributed by
Ari
on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:46:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Flying through the hills
I see fields unknown
But the snow is melted
The grass has grown
Flying through the rainbows
The colours are not all there
But I'll keep on flying
I'll find the missing somewhere
Flying over the river
The souls are cold and blue
Hoping I can bring out the sun
So a warmer river will run through
Always searching for some kind of truth
Not knowing if anyone has any proof
Seeing changes towards a time without war
And then the changes fall to the floor
Over the hills and far away I fly
Helping those I feel will cry
One more time I ask for an answer
But there is no question
Not yet
Running over the same ground
Trying to learn
Sometimes you feel right, other times wrong
Eventually, we all get a turn
Copyright ©
Ari
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2005-12-11 22:46:18]
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Re: Not Yet
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:59:40 PM AEST
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| This one has very good imagery. :D Its a great write. Keep up the good work. I'll keep my eyes out for your poems :D - Luv KK |
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Re: Not Yet
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:40:21 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
Please keep it up.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Not Yet
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by The_Cowardly_Lion on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:09:08 AM AEST
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| Excellent word painting. You dont even need an imagination to see it, all you need do is read. Loved it |
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