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I've Been Humming Too Many Words
Contributed by
minus_blindfold
on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 08:47:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I sleep too much,
I feed too much,
I need too much,
I'm gone too much,
I want too much,
I heed too much,
I weep too much,
I'm lost too much,
I stop and I stare too much,
Afraid that I care too much,
I'm sore too much,
It's way too much too stop...
You're probably right this time,
But I don't wanna listen,
You're probably right this time,
But I don't even care,
I speak too much,
I mean too much,
I lie too much,
I'm sick too much,
I'm bored too much,
I forget too much,
I love too much,
I'm way too much to stop,
You're probably right this time,
But I don't wanna listen,
You're probably right this time,
But I don't even care,
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Re: I've Been Humming Too Many Words
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by priss on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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| good write! sometimes too much is just enough. |
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Re: I've Been Humming Too Many Words
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by The_Cowardly_Lion on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 09:47:59 PM AEST
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good moody piece. look forward to your next submission. you cant write too much
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Re: I've Been Humming Too Many Words
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:20:06 PM AEST
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| HAHA wow that was GREAT! :D I loved it. But I agree though, sometimes too much is the perfect ammount lol. :D |
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Re: I've Been Humming Too Many Words
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:19:19 AM AEST
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I heh ya.
huggs,
emy |
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