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The Greatest Shepard
Contributed by
jessejames
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Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 06:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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My life was moving but in the wrong way
I was lost and confused almost too late to pray
So i put down the liquer and gave up the booze
After loosing all that i had to loose
I fell on my knees to confess my sins
Knowing this is where my journey begins
Some roads are tough and others worse
Im just thankfull im not in the back of a hurse
All the times it seemed God was so hard to find
It turns out i was the one leaving him behind
Still he cares for every soul that's ever been shattered
Like it is the only soul thats ever mattered
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jessejames
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Re: The Greatest Shepard
(User Rating: 1 ) by Minus_Blindfold on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 08:52:27 PM AEST (User
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Tis blunt and stating the obvious, but moreso on a level of pure experience rather than someone whining over a "lost love" or meaningless quarrel with a significant other.
Kudos my friend, very good job! |
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Re: The Greatest Shepard
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 10:23:43 PM AEST (User
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WOW that was REALLY good. I LOVED it. Is it okay if I save that just so I can read it when I please? It reminds me of my best friend. SHe struggles with God as we speak. Good write. :D |
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Re: The Greatest Shepard
(User Rating: 1 ) by Packatack on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:55:28 AM AEST (User
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Amen Praise God, God's way is the only way!
I had trouble with booze and things didn't work for me until I chose to follow Him!
Thanks for sharing.....God bless you |
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