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The Middle
Contributed by
Corruptor
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Draped in black and red
The warrior turns his head
And to his right he casts his stare
As he hovers in the air.
His eyes are clear,
His body is ready.
The sword he holds dear
Now points ahead, steady.
A mist has appeared
And in the opaque white,
His enemies have neared,
But this time he’ll stay to fight.
A blur of black and red,
As the warrior turns his head
And to darkness casts a last glance
As the sword begins to dance.
Copyright ©
Corruptor
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2003-01-24 12:40:00]
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Re: The Middle
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:54:21 PM AEST
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| tHIS WAS A REALLY GOOD FANTASY POEM,ALOT OF THOUGHT INTO THIS! CHRISTINA |
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Re: The Middle
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:53:19 PM AEST
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HI CORRUPTOR,
DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME,KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITE.RICHARD CAMPBELL. |
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Re: The Middle
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by Icequeen on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 12:55:26 PM AEST
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| Cool, i take it you read fantasy? Perhaps. Very Atmospheric. |
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Re: The Middle
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by Corruptor on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 01:34:56 AM AEST
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| To tell you the truth, I'm not a big fan of fantasy. This poem was my attempt to describe a recuring dream I keep having. I'm glad you like the poem. :-) |
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Re: The Middle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:01:11 PM AEST
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Hey Corruptor
when are you going to write "The End?" |
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